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Walls by =GoheX:iconGoheX:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Haiku & Eastern


I hate these dead walls;
I miss the wind and the sun,
touch, of early evening.
©2009-2010 =GoheX
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The weather's been changing so much here but I feel like I can't leave my house just to go see it.

I have too much to do that i'm not doing anyway, but I can't leave.

I can't wait till summer.

Notes:

I didn't want to write anything large about how "I want to go outside", so I researched a little and followed this:

[link]

I love this small style. So fitting for my small thoughts :)

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*GoldenGirls Mar 9, 2009, 11:56:06 AM
Nom nom nom I could eat your small thoughts and never have to eat again :heart:
xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran
:icongohex:
=GoheX Mar 9, 2009, 1:22:43 PM
:heart: :D

They multiply like genetically modified super horny rabits, on crack.

<3
:icongoldengirls:
*GoldenGirls Mar 9, 2009, 1:49:27 PM
Awwwwww :aww:
xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran
:icongohex:
=GoheX Mar 9, 2009, 1:54:22 PM
awwwwww *chinese*

<3
:icongoldengirls:
*GoldenGirls Mar 9, 2009, 1:55:22 PM
They're so cute :D
xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran
:icongoldengirls:
*GoldenGirls Mar 9, 2009, 2:08:40 PM
OMG!!!!!!! XDDDDDDD AHAHAAAAAAAAAAAA
xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran
:icongohex:
=GoheX Mar 9, 2009, 2:11:13 PM
Poo on toast ftw.

<3
:icongoldengirls:
*GoldenGirls Mar 9, 2009, 2:16:53 PM
Absolutely :XD:
xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran
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